okay.i've let you go on this fashion thing for a couple of weeks and it's just not working.you're doing editorial (badly), not a type specimen book.cut the text by a lot and focus on choosing typography, mixing fonts, arranging elements on a spread.no color.just deal with the type.i want to see a GREAT improvement by tomorrow.g.
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so, this is how this "page" is going to be. Since im doing a folding,
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okay.
i've let you go on this fashion thing for a couple of weeks and it's just not working.
you're doing editorial (badly), not a type specimen book.
cut the text by a lot and focus on choosing typography, mixing fonts, arranging elements on a spread.
no color.
just deal with the type.
i want to see a GREAT improvement by tomorrow.
g.
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